Thursday, January 1, 2009

New Year On The Crescent Moon Comments

Rating: 4.1

Wanna be in that crescent moon
Sitting side by side, hand in hand
Lying my head on your shoulder
Enjoy the delight of tonight only with you
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Little Red Apple
COMMENTS
Sandra Fowler 07 January 2009

You paint a very pleasing poem picture. Have a wonderful 2009. As always, Sandra

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Nikoru Bathory 07 January 2009

simple yet so lovely, , , , start from the 2nd line, they're my wish for years, , ,

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Ency Bearis 07 January 2009

a passionate poem..lovely..very good...10

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Keith Hendrickson 04 January 2009

i like the way this flows. also liked the way you began. nice piece.

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Brianna Trombley 04 January 2009

very romantic poem, the kind of love everyone longs for, I think this is my favorite poem of yours so far, great job

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Heather Chaney 02 January 2009

My goodness it's so beautifull! !

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Fiona Davidson 02 January 2009

Nice write..thanks for sharing it

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Kesav Easwaran 01 January 2009

presenting a beautiful new year eve with your love on your passion rich starry imaginative sky...good poem, Little...pleasingly romantic...10

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Joseph Poewhit 01 January 2009

Nothing like them golden moments

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Sarah Sisson 01 January 2009

That is so romantic! Love this one for the new year!

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