The old year has departed
Away with bitter disappointments,
And has paved a room
For the new year to be ushered
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What a positive and an optimistic poem! ! I like your optimism and real hope! Actually, i am not an optimistic person at all: D! you can say pessimistic, , but no problem: D! Good Job..Happy new year :)
wonderful visual, extended metaphor The arrival of the new year Has brought light every where With promises to bring hope excellent meditative poem 10++++++++++ Happy New Year! Mari