Thursday, December 31, 2015

New Year Cheer (Limerick) Comments

Rating: 4.5

On talk of new year some people jeer
While many others party and cheer
But when it has come
They know they were dumb
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Wes Vogler 05 January 2016

Since you ask I would smooth out the second line While others may party and cheer first line not standard but works well. All in all an excellent limerick. rates a nine

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Kim Barney 01 January 2016

Interesting limerick and so true. I spent New Year's Eve with three of my siblings and their spouses in the old house where I grew up. We played games and laughed until we cried. We had a keg of ROOT BEER; no liquor of any kind to be found. Then we all drove home, sober and sound.

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