Friday, July 6, 2018

New Year Cake Is Prepared For Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

My son has prepared for me,
A new dish in breakfast,
This is new year cake,
Gram flour you say or,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mahtab Bangalee 08 July 2018

nice description of good dish mouth watering! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 July 2018

What a good son you have, Kumarmani. Very thoughtful. An excellent write that informs and emphasizes the good relationship between father and son. And of course a great acknowledgement of the many graces of the Lord.10+++++

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Akhtar Jawad 07 July 2018

New year will bring joy and fortune. By mercy of God we get pure food. A lovely poem acknowledging a lovely son.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 July 2018

i always forget 1000000000000 points plus 10 inn advance for the cake in 2019

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 July 2018

mouth watering ask him to send some to me in 2019 and place some gur beside thanks you too give me a chance to produce a cacky poetry perchance i composed so far poetry only of romance ssssh... yes I know it bhabhi ji will be hearing she also composes lovey poetry do you hold competitions homely

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Valsa George 06 July 2018

It looks so colorful.....! I am sure it is delicious too! Nice that your son so thoughtfully cooks it for you! A great gesture of filial love!

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Douglas Scotney 06 July 2018

At a Stretch, KM, it could be the earth from space

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 July 2018

Excellent! This cake is the need of the hour! I am delighted...extremely delighted to read this poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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