Saturday, January 16, 2016

New Year Comments

Rating: 5.0

The stinking rubbish on roadside,
From it, empty bottles, half-burnt cigarette butt,
Polythene bags with half eaten naan,
Bones and crushed aluminum foils of
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Rajnish Manga 17 January 2016

Congratulations, my dear poet friend for a stunning portrayal of life of a hapless and wretched girl on typical day in this New Year, searching in the heap of garbage for something to eat, drink or to preserve. The irony acts like an eye-opener. Thanks. I quote: Witnessing dogs and crows fight For a piece of bone. Alongside a poor, meek girl In knickers and a top surveys keenly.

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