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I dream of the wonderland there
but when I am no more here
I slip the beauty of life
I leave here
hoping for something more
beyond the horizon of existence
when we are no more
but in a supercilious hope
we live to hopefully return
to relay heaven's lovelier
than one here
anyone can ever say
the
beautifullest EARTH
ours mine at least
but
who will you voice your feelings
to a body since released to eternity
no one will be here to listen
my friendly ones to thee
just believe me
I have been beyond the beyond
and
safely returned
as my body had not been burned
my heart started thumping again
all ‘twas not in vain
my body totally intact did remain
so I know
what is life
here and there
sad
nowhere
else
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my than you young lovers fresh comers584 reads just inn one day thanks all poets and friends
Fascinating and quit clear considering the mystery! Interesting and tantalizing one's imagination. Excellently done!
Thank you Sandra what a pleasure to see you walk my pages thanks again
Such a well penned poem, dear poet.....10+++++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
my newer fiends all lovers my thanks for...584 reads just inn one day thanks all poets and friends