New Wave Poetry(For Ultra Modern Wave Poets Only) Poem by me poet yeps poet

New Wave Poetry(For Ultra Modern Wave Poets Only)

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I dream of the wonderland there
but when I am no more here
I slip the beauty of life
I leave here
hoping for something more
beyond the horizon of existence

when we are no more
but in a supercilious hope
we live to hopefully return
to relay heaven's lovelier
than one here
anyone can ever say
the
beautifullest EARTH
ours mine at least

but
who will you voice your feelings
to a body since released to eternity
no one will be here to listen
my friendly ones to thee

just believe me
I have been beyond the beyond
and
safely returned
as my body had not been burned
my heart started thumping again
all ‘twas not in vain
my body totally intact did remain

so I know
what is life
here and there
sad
nowhere
else

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Saturday, October 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lifespan,love and life,salvation,life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes Believe me I really died not knowing how what happened Then came alive 5 minutes of my life were unknownTill I was pulled out from under a bigvehicle I don't know what ever happenedfor 5 minutes...Don't believe me ask my spouse you are free to
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 October 2018

my newer fiends all lovers my thanks for...584 reads just inn one day thanks all poets and friends

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 October 2018

my than you young lovers fresh comers584 reads just inn one day thanks all poets and friends

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Sandra Feldman 06 October 2018

Fascinating and quit clear considering the mystery! Interesting and tantalizing one's imagination. Excellently done!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 October 2018

Thank you Sandra what a pleasure to see you walk my pages thanks again

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 October 2018

Such a well penned poem, dear poet.....10+++++++++++++

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