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I wouldn't call it a masterpiece, thats really going over the top but it is funny and a lot more light hearted from your usual stuff. Its nice to see you got the sunshine.

An awesome lyric! Hey! hey! You wrought the wonder with poem. I like onomatopoeia or imitation of sounds as did with clock and horse. Check poems feels the same rhythm.. 'Tick tock went the clock And so did Johnny Bottomrock.' Hands off! Hands went up!

Wo0o0o0ow this poem is a Masterpiece! I love it really, a new way of declamation poetry, perfect A+++ :)