New Story Poem by Rini Shibu

New Story

Rating: 4.6


If I get a chance tomorrow
I could take you out from all sorrows
Come and dissolve in my feelings
I will take you up across the ceilings
To set you free from your worries
And give a beginning of a new story

Friday, October 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: free
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 12 October 2018

This is a very wonderful poem about new story.

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Kostas Lagos 12 October 2018

Another great one Rini! Not that it is a surprise to anyone... Thanks!

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Akhtar Jawad 19 October 2018

Nagah o dil ko qarar kysa muta o gham meN Wuh jab mile hayN to unse har bar ki hay ulfat naye sire se (Faiz)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 October 2018

SECOND PART: ..............Thank you for sharing this caring poem, giving a new perspective. I do hope there are people who can dissolve in your feelings, then that would be an enlighting flight for them, so a beginning of a new story. Wishing you much success. God bless you perpetually. A 10++++++++++++for the vote/ratings.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 October 2018

FIRST PART: This is a brilliant poem, dear Rini, again a brevity! you are just like the Angel I have met recently amongst the crowd of Seattle in the U.S.A. helping the most tired ones of come what may for all people who are in deep sorrow-condition, is this a super gigantic way without any frustration..

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Tom Allport 15 October 2018

A poem of if only if I could then I would? Nice sentiments well written Rini.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 October 2018

give a beginning of a new story, wonderful write

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