Saturday, March 14, 2009

New Start Haiku Comments

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when illusions burst
you freeze. stand still.
all you remember is how to loose.
and the feel of the noose
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Yana Djin
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Catrina Heart 14 March 2009

Hi! I was expecting a haiku made of 17 syllables.....I was looking for that kind of pieces....anyway thanks for sharing your creations.

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