Friday, September 11, 2015

New Shoes. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Falling in slow motion.
Gasping for what fuels life.
Nothing in sight to slow this descent.
A never ending view of blue.
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Gary Hembree
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Noreen Carden 26 October 2017

Been there done that with new shoes nice poem Well written

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2016

Short and sweet write on new shoes. Loved reading it.

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* Sunprincess * 11 September 2015

......love the metaphor, new shoes....good job! ★

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