Bring in the harvest sheaves, and store
Them safely, on the barn's stone floor.
Let all who've worked to stack and bind,
On the farmhouse table, their cider, find.
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This one has a strong flavour of Keat's Ode to Autumn (one of my favourite poems, by the way) . Beautiful images of abundance and the rhythm of the seasons set in a basket of wonderful rhymes. Fine penning. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxx
Now this is a great poem if ever I saw one, I love the mood and the theme-set it pulls the reader in to a safe and warm country setting whilst teaching a lesson at the same time. This could quite easily be your best poem so-far Ernestine, ...(QUALITY WRITING) Well done Love duncan X
Poetess E.>>>Is it fair to say that GOOD POET'S love to write about th'effulgence of Autumn? Of course it is...And th' proof is above this box, in enhancitive measure. BTW: LOOKS LIKE WE GOT A 3'ER OUT THERE (to go along w/ th' Oner) same person, proably) ...FOOLS ; ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
I'm so tired after reading this. It's so realistic I feel like I've done all this labour myself! BTW - 'plough' vs. 'plow', the way it's spelled in the US. Good to be reminded of that difference. I had almost forgotten.
Great desciptive quality conjuring up many beautiful images. Excellent write. Love, Andrew xx