Thursday, March 26, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! New Palm Comments

Rating: 5.0

(Inspired by Christine Austin Cole’s
“Rest your hesitation in my hands
Where it might find its home
And I’ll set it gently inside these lines
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Rehan Hyder
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Marieta Maglas 11 June 2009

personification of the nature: ''Perhaps in this room without window Seasons, suns and snow has never seen a door ajar enough To import life '' ''room without window'' is an embedded metaphor, by suggesting that when we are imprisoned in our thoughts and flash, light can not penetrate to save us...10++

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Chuck Audette 10 April 2009

Love your repeated lines 'perhaps..' giving this a wonderful, melancholy, introspective feel. 10! -chuck

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