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personification of the nature: ''Perhaps in this room without window Seasons, suns and snow has never seen a door ajar enough To import life '' ''room without window'' is an embedded metaphor, by suggesting that when we are imprisoned in our thoughts and flash, light can not penetrate to save us...10++

Love your repeated lines 'perhaps..' giving this a wonderful, melancholy, introspective feel. 10! -chuck