Friday, May 12, 2017

New Old Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

I couldn't help but notice his smile.
We kinda just stood there and stared a while.
I knew him and he knew me,
we talked and hung out a lot during the day.
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Crystal Pierce
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Dakota Brown 30 May 2017

I loved it baby girl A+

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Bri Edwards 19 May 2017

hopefully this one end up so poorly....don't you want doesn't after one? ? ? ? ? if not, why not? bri :) remember our old friend proofread! ! and if you agree, do yourself and your readers a favor and CHANGE IT on PH. :)) otherwise, i like the poem!

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 May 2017

Hi Chryssie, Nice poem. On friendship. Many friendships start this way. Good write.10+++

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