New Nest Comments

good poem, but what is the condition in human nests?

This is a strong poem with a structure of strong metaphors.

So wonderful! Simply superb.10/10. 'The mother-mind tenderly visualizing The young one in a nest of her own Chosen by her beloved for a new life.' This the cycle of life! Please read my poem 'Thoughts Spun Around A Bird's Nest' which is written on similar lines.

When nestlings fly away to far away skies, the mother bird sits lonely in her nest to start another round of new life! Beautifully portrayed! !

New n est.. new life..an awakening poem Lovely! ; D

liked these lines very much: The mother-mind tenderly visualizing The young one in a nest of her own Chosen by her beloved for a new life. you hve a fine flow of language. i liked ur poem very much. thank u for sharing

Very moving. My young one just flew to her first nest. Though you make it sound much more beautiful than whe does! I will read this many and often today.