Sunday, November 8, 2009

New Mountains Comments

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Each day I climb new mountains
in the struggle for life.
Sometimes my limbs get weary
and I want to give, but I have to go on.
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David Harris
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Patti Masterman 08 November 2009

Great poem and I loved Carol's comment. Wish I could find a way to minimize some of the 'mountains'; but then again, I would not want to 'dumb down' life, lol.

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Fay Slimm 08 November 2009

You are right David - -life offers us new mountains to climb every day - - a meaningful poem....10 from Fay

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Carol Gall 08 November 2009

great write some days those mountains seem bigger 10

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Tsira Goge 08 November 2009

Very good David, , But than highly our mountains, falling downwards, painful there is more... / with a smile / All the best, Tsira

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