New Morning Comments

Let my breast rest on your palms, cover my body with sunflower seeds let there be gold, truth and life very nice lines..

ya sure it is very beautiful lines a big value poem 10+

Brillant expression in simplest terms. A definate 10. You don't write often but when you do your words shine. Love your work and view it with envy. Milda

I see a nymph in a beautiful morning.

Beautiful conception beautifully written Chris

all your poems are nice...you dnt need any specific comments.keep good work going on...

I'll agree with Melvina Germain in saying these words are beyond compare in reference & relation to the subject matter used in this poem. Shane

A new dawn and dawning of fresh thoughts of a soul! Love it seems the morning brings?

Absolutely beautiful Pia, I like it very much--Melvina

The blend b/w nature, love and longing is perfect here. Lovely poem! Preets

I come back here again and again to read something new from you, but this is the last one uploaded by you - on 27th July 2006. I wonder when will you share with us more of your beautiful narrations.

Passionate longing to be the beloved of the man totally devoted to his wife. It’s beautiful love poetry.

To convey such deep emotions you have used the simplest of the words.. this is amazing! ! ! A 10 from me too!

Astounding, wonderful imagery. Pure gold.

Lovely images. Another 10!

you seem to write a lot about nature. and it works perfectly with your writing style. its such a pleasure to read your bright, uplifting poems. :)

Your poems are golden... New Morning shines! Frank

What a beautiful poem to read this morning. Sincerely, Connie Webb

A lovely shining poem