Wednesday, April 6, 2016

New Moon (Haiku) Comments

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missing satellite
under cover, out of sight
wise to play hooky
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Kim Barney 13 April 2016

Clever. Well done in classic haiku format.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 13 April 2016

thank you for the kind words. they are much appreciated!

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Guru Kothandaraman 09 April 2016

another cheeky haiku. well written and good twist!

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Stephen Park 06 April 2016

wise to play hooky is great advice for lovers on new moon night

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Gil Highlander 06 April 2016

A little jewel, loved the way you play with the moon.

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