Tuesday, January 1, 2013

New Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon, half dead,
gave an eerie glow,
consoled by clouds,
she laid with motions slow;
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
COMMENTS
Connor Whyte 01 January 2013

Beautifully written shows the true beauty of nature and of a woman, The way your portray this is as if the woman is a goddess of nature. Truly wonderful.

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Gajanan Mishra 01 January 2013

good poem. The moon half dead. thanks.

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