Sunday, July 1, 2018

New Leaves (Tanka) Comments

Rating: 5.0

"Those little new leaves
unfamiliar with the rains
learns from every drop
a life of comfort and pain
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 July 2018

A brilliant poem with a meaningful message. Masterly crafted succinct write.10++++ Onto my Poem List.

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Jesus Llorico 05 July 2018

Thank you so much Ms Rose Marie Juan-austin, really appreciate your comnent.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 July 2018

gracefully penned this Tanka

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Jesus Llorico 01 July 2018

Thank you Mahtab Bangalee, really appreciate your comment.

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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2018

Well thought out and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Diaz.

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Jesus Llorico 01 July 2018

Thank you so much Mr Chinedu Dike for your comnent.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

Unfamiliar little new leaves have broader dreams to achieve success in new light through learning and perception. Very beautiful poem is excellently penned. These come out from a life of comfort and pain. This is a poem of joy and grief...10

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Jesus Llorico 01 July 2018

Thank you as ever, for a well refined comment, really appreciate it, Mr Mahakul.

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