Wednesday, December 30, 2015

New Lease To Pen Comments

Rating: 5.0

With falling ink drop by drop
Hard rocks melting
like dewdrops on rose petal
I see the moonbeam of hopes
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M. Asim Nehal
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Suzon Albert 08 July 2020

Nice philosophical poem, keep writing till you have pen.

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Darren Jkoeryo 31 December 2015

Mighty pen nicely praised.....Awesome poem man.

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Kelly Kurt 30 December 2015

The lifeless pen is given power by the one who wields it with passion. Excellent poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 December 2015

The ink of the writer. Nice work.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 December 2015

When matter got a soul it started thinking and thoughts inspired the man to become a poet.

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T Rajan Evol 30 December 2015

Amazing poem In the prism of life The story of your love Multiply by reflection of truth Soothing sinking heart under winter sun I keep my fingers crossed To see the fate of my poetry On endless sky bending beyond Cosmic shore of this world.

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Nosheen Irfan 30 December 2015

Sheer class. Beautiful beautiful poem. Worth a thousand reads.10 ten times.

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Lily Yang 30 December 2015

share Soothing sinking heart under winter sun

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 December 2015

With falling ink drop by drop this pen drafts monumental writings those touch mind and soul. Cosmic shore of this world is interestingly captured by this pen only in mind. Very wise and amazing poem shared definitely.10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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