Monday, September 8, 2014

New Journey Comments

Rating: 4.7

Your imprints
On my body
On my soul
Will remain
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Terry Craddock 06 November 2016

I love the contrast between 'Your imprints On my body On my soul Will remain Etched in stone' and 'With My favourite back pack A pair of good old shoes And all hardy terrain I am ready to go cruise' encapsulating the words, sentiments within; old seasoned shoes are good sure friends on a journey through hardy terrain, they bless our feet on the journey

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Kishore Kumar Das 07 April 2016

Nalini, your poem is so positive.....sometimes we forget that we have got everything.....well penned lines..

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Soumita Sarkar 21 September 2014

so simple yet so elegant in style................I invite you to read and rate my poems.Thanks.

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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 09 September 2014

U r so poetic....thanks for the beautiful comment Achill Lad

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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 09 September 2014

U r so poetic....thanks for the beautiful comment Achill Lad

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Achill Lad 09 September 2014

Spread your wings and fly away. Leave your pain in yesterday.

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