New Issue Comments

Onelia, A lovely message in it. Life is permanently under construction. Love dies! ! ! it revives, new issue! ! ! new relation, new birth! ! ! new hopes, frustration! ! ! reunion, dip and dive! ! ! new depths strive. CP

A delicate play on 'issue' with 'birth' renewal implications. But the poem is so much deeper... Issue is an end-point to a process worth thinking about! Subtle... Rgds, Ivan

Onelia there is such a clever and yet simple message therein. You poem reminds me of a poem by a poet called Brian Patten, the poem name is 'It is time to tidy up your life'. Your poem mentions mother nature gives us a clue, sometimes I think it's our soul that gives us a clue also. A very lovely poem with multi-layers. HG: -) xx

We often dream of freshness of new love... new offspring.... it is so splendid a thougt a passionate write and I think I should have read this much before.. 10 for this Onelia.. Rgs Rema

recycled feeling or a second-hand heart :) a very good poem...

The creative mind is at work here. The rhythm and rhyme of this piece fluctuates a little but the message is quite clear to the reader. The essentials are here, the presentation is not quite there in the body of the work GW62

love when recycles by the dream just as new leaf to the tree greeness plays with the grin and the echo still brims................superb imagery of love when repeated, excellent work, thanks for sharing

a new kid! ? ? are you trying to re-kindle by popping another out? Interesting to see if im interpreting this right in any way at all hahah

Beautiful sentiments inked from your ever-perceptive pen. Lovely. HG: -) xx

I agree with Allie...the whole notion of recycled feelings might sound boring or mundane..; .but you show that it takes you to a new level...and to new generations...love it...Coach

What an interesting proposition - recycled feelings. I like it - and the poem inspired by the notion. To me feelings infinitely recyclable. They are expressions of life shimmering inside the heart which are always there - be they fanned by passion or terror, or left to flicker. An interesting poem about advaita (non duality) methinks. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

This wonderful work deftly addresses the complications of life itself.....every act...every move is in some way intricately entwined with the other! An extraordinary composition my friend.

lovely baby poem! , beautiful...........

A recycling of emotions - old love can spark something brand new... j x

Fresh and full of love...but hey..that's just you! love Donall Donall

A poem of contrast between the old and the new. Everything changes, apart from our wishes.

Love born anew! The most important of issues too. Eloquently said. Fx

A Stalking.... how wonderful.... I will get the tissues... should that be ONspring? aroha