New Generation Comments

It is an abstract poem very well written and the message is a warning sign for those who live without thinking that this world belongs primarily to children, the new generation.Thank you for sharing.10+++++

so true my friend..... your poem based on facts in life.. well done written Alen...thanks for sharing! ! ! ^__^ DaNa...

good poem. it is true we have become lazy and dependent of many things. and the sad thing is that i dont think we will change.

It is true, as technology advanced, so many people in the world became obsessed with the idea of comfort, they want to do away with stress. A lot of people do not want to take exercise, to them it is stressful, in fact they want to live in a world where there is complete comfort. As they say 'too much everything is bad'.

yes, but we must be history makers that will change the way people look in our generation.

this is wat people around the world think of our generation.. only we have the power to change their mindset... thanks a bunch for sharing ur thots.... :)

that is progression dear..new generations are enjoying the high tech measures, , , and that is a part of development..

Good write sorry i didnt like your flow of words 10s

Excellent and your poem is based on facts of life. You have nicely portrayed todays generation in beautiful words. 10/10

wow! ! i enjoyed that very much. it's very true. 'but what exactly did we, get better in? the world has got so fake, that we're dependent even on the smallest of things' loved this part very much because i can see where you are coming from. the thrid line is so powerful. i believe every part of it. thanks for sharing. :)