Saturday, November 21, 2015

New Flower New Leaf Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear trees morning breeze says
You feel this early dawn's mind
Wind is blowing to give freshness
As you give fresh oxygen to us.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Barium Muserounica 23 April 2019

Blooming of new flower always attracts attention of us and we feel tender petals. To spread fragrance we should feel the motivating mind and efficiency of life. Flower with little smile motivates mind. This poem has broader aspect.

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Mj Lemon 26 November 2015

Your words truly bring out nature's beauty. A wonderful poem...a 10.

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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2015

Yet another poem on freshness and jubilation.....Loved it Sir

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Akhtar Jawad 22 November 2015

Leaves are one of the great magics of nature, a workshop where plants and trees prepare their food in the sunlight. A new leave is a symbol of an addition in the existing workshops, a beautiful green message of nature. A wonderful poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 November 2015

Fantastic praise of bountiful nature and it's products like trees, leaves and flowers that sprread new life and fragrance in the world with advent of new dawn. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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