Sunday, November 22, 2015

New Experiences Laced In Perfect Friendships Comments

Rating: 5.0

suddenly unexpectedly
as moment a summer breeze
springs up caresses whispers
fresh cooling joy briefly
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Terence George Craddock
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Daniel Brick 01 January 2016

Developing a WISE STARDUST PERSONALITY must be a work in progress. It's a marvelous notion and the poem which surrounds the phrase articulates at least partofthemeffects of such an inner core of being inopeningmupmthe individual to cosmicinfluences. I suspect paarly this blessed condition is achieved by conscious effort but paertly it is a given, a gift of the universe to its devoted worshippers who recognize both the whole thing and its individual parts aere in some mysterious way ONEMTHING.

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Mihaela Pirjol 23 November 2015

The rhythm and the theme are in perfect harmony in this soothing and optimistic poem. Very well synchronized!

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