New Dreams Begin Comments

Weaverbirds? I didn't know you had those in the UK. Your mind must be dreaming far afield... Lovely poem. -chuck

Nice enjoyable poem Ernestine.Thanks for sharing. Sid xx

as much as I can at time hate my noisey mind - it really does produce some wonderful thoughts. I loved your poem x

A lovely piece Ernestine, it's nice to know how new dreams begin. Love, Andrew xx

Send me releasing, calming joy, Wildness depart. New dreams begin. Then, just to let this charm employ, Backed by strings of a mandolin................... newness never refuses dream of red yet it blooms deep red by setting sun............joy parades over moonlit blue, amazingly heart felt, ingeniously luscious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

oh, i love how you ended your piece with these lines: Send me releasing, calming joy, Wildness depart. New dreams begin. Then, just to let this charm employ, Backed by strings of a mandolin. A real pleasure to read...

Such a creative way of taming a mind with spinning thoughts. As usual, you know how to use imagery so well, and end on a positive note. 10 Karin Anderson

Rich with images Ernestine...beautiful write....10+++