Wednesday, January 30, 2008

New Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The new dawn is rising and colours are living
They reach out and touch me inside,
As the soft dappled clouds in the skies slowly drifting
Upon morning breezes they ride.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 15 March 2008

Yet anpother great write Andrew. our ability in writing poems is brilliant. I enjoy every one of them. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ann Beard 30 January 2008

Excellent Andrew gives a lovely feeling of contentment.

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Philip Housiaux 30 January 2008

Excellent work with the formal stanza structure and such beautiful images of light coming through headges and the motion of the daffodils of spring.I wonder, did you choose the gentler steady rhythm and ing femine endings to evoke the peace and slow progress of springs arrival?

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