Recently, BlackPearl behaved not kindly
He intimidated his other siblings
He forbade two cats* from getting in
But he let Zebra and Monkey sleep in the cat house.
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I like the energy in this poem. Words like intimidated, forbade, make it sound the Cat Paradise is in crises! ! Thank you for sharing your new poem. Great piece!
Thank you for sharing this poem, New Crises At The Cat Paradise! ! ! I have two Yorkie's dogs, so, I understand your situation! ! Life is never simple! ! !
Sweet hits the spot! ! That way, you don't lose your reader halfway through the reading. Your topics, theme and style of writing is fantastic! !