Tuesday, September 29, 2009

****new Beginnings Comments

Rating: 2.9

the clouds
................dark in the horizon
..............................prepare for departure

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Ben Gieske
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Ana Monnar 26 October 2010

Very nicely written; I enjoyed it.

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Javier Zamorano 08 January 2010

Well written and beautiful philosophy. I love the power this piece delvers with so few words. Take care.

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Ivor Hogg 20 November 2009

aint that the truth. we learn best by example

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Excellent Ben, this is so true as Meggie and Sandra have commented too! Wouldn't it be great if we could display free verse without having to put all the dots in as I can see this would look even better than it already is (if that is possible) . 10 love Karin

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Meggie Gultiano 04 October 2009

yes, I fully agree, Ben..you are right then..Lovely write

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Sandra Martyres 02 October 2009

Very true Ben... I like your presentation style too..10

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