Monday, December 17, 2018

New Beginnings Comments

Rating: 5.0

The end is in sight
Walking slowly down a new path
Not knowing where it will lead
The moon can guide through darkness
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Jennifer Birchall
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2019

What a beautiful poem dear friend! Captivating expression! My favorite lines: Travelling to different places/Wonderful sights to be seen/With a fresh pair of eyes Top marks

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Lyn Paul 15 January 2019

Yes, The further you go the stronger you become I believe some people were born with this strength. You were one. May the second chapter be about real living and enjoyment.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 December 2018

The moon can guide through darkness Surrounded by a million stars, to feel less alone. The further you go, the stronger you become......... lovely poem. with such lofty thoughts, motivational...... daring.... to become great......... tony

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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