The sun tears through the heavens and
awakens me to a life beyond living.
My slumber opens the door to dreams
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Beautiful imagery, I see why this is one of yur favourites. Keep sharing :)
A very fine end to very good poem. Reminds me to some extent of Paul Valery, one of my favourite poets. Think I'll put you on my Poets' list. Tom Billsborough
I enjoyed this poem very much. I like the way that you have used the senses to create visual, auditory and kinaesthetic imagery.
Maybe hope is belief that there is always a second chance for new beginnings. After an awakening perhaps? Good poem, made me think