New Beginnings Comments

Maybe hope is belief that there is always a second chance for new beginnings. After an awakening perhaps? Good poem, made me think

Beautiful imagery, I see why this is one of yur favourites. Keep sharing :)

Wow. This is amazing.

A very fine end to very good poem. Reminds me to some extent of Paul Valery, one of my favourite poets. Think I'll put you on my Poets' list. Tom Billsborough

Beautiful poem, wonderful imagery... :) :)

i wish i had a similar kid of style as you have

I enjoyed this poem very much. I like the way that you have used the senses to create visual, auditory and kinaesthetic imagery.

Beautifully written! It's short but amazing.

I love your poetic diction! A truly beautiful poem!

there is an echo of cosmic understanding i can relate :)