Forever maybe
mirror wave a greet goodbye
forced hand of hello
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Very poignant - especially like the last verse. Good one Kelvin.
Never thought it'll come to pass farewell, even for a short time brings a tear to the eye it kills me to see that smile disappear so how you think I feel when I'm forced to say goodbye well expressed feelings at that particular moment of people's life! Nice!
Wringing out your heart with anguish to say goodbye, so honest and true of life, a great write.
to a beloved we will never say never.even if we dont say ever it doesnt change any thing.even if we do not say ((i love you or i miss you)) it doesnt change the love. to a beloved we never say goodbye to keep the hope to see him or her again.to atleast keep the hope to live. supperb one i really enjoyed the romantically way of written~nb
Much love expressed, along with anguish. I feel your need to be close to this person! I found the first stanza a little confused? And shy should you never have said never? Is it too much pressure and too unrealistic in some way? Thanks for sharing x x
It starts joyfully and ends sadly. This poem can be a great contribution the Valentine fever next week. Thanks for sharing this Kevin.