Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Never Will I Ever Comments

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Forever maybe
mirror wave a greet goodbye
forced hand of hello
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Kelvin Owusu
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 05 February 2013

It starts joyfully and ends sadly. This poem can be a great contribution the Valentine fever next week. Thanks for sharing this Kevin.

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Valerie Dohren 26 January 2013

Very poignant - especially like the last verse. Good one Kelvin.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 January 2013

Never thought it'll come to pass farewell, even for a short time brings a tear to the eye it kills me to see that smile disappear so how you think I feel when I'm forced to say goodbye well expressed feelings at that particular moment of people's life! Nice!

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Heather Wilson 25 January 2013

Wringing out your heart with anguish to say goodbye, so honest and true of life, a great write.

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Nader Baheri 23 January 2013

to a beloved we will never say never.even if we dont say ever it doesnt change any thing.even if we do not say ((i love you or i miss you)) it doesnt change the love. to a beloved we never say goodbye to keep the hope to see him or her again.to atleast keep the hope to live. supperb one i really enjoyed the romantically way of written~nb

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Stevie Taite 23 January 2013

Much love expressed, along with anguish. I feel your need to be close to this person! I found the first stanza a little confused? And shy should you never have said never? Is it too much pressure and too unrealistic in some way? Thanks for sharing x x

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