Friday, December 11, 2009

Never Will I Comments

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Never will I kiss a pair of lips
Without wishing they were yours.
Never will I get a hug
Without wishing it was your embrace.
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Zac Plague
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Serenity Prayer 18 December 2009

ah young love, aint it grand? lol. a sad poem, but good job. i know many people who can relate.

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Danny H 12 December 2009

Line: 9, against is spelled wrong, Line: 22, Spent i think it is, ? LOl sorry I have terrible spelling and feel dumb when i spell my own poetry wrong! thought id help you out; ] but other than that is absolutly beautiful! felt from the heart, the soul, spoke through the mind

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Zac Plague

Zac Plague

Danville, Virginia
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