Wednesday, July 5, 2017

Never Understood Comments

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People and places made her nervous
Always staring at her awkwardness
Stricken with her dull pallid exterior
Refusing to believe that her heart
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Nidhi Agrawal
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Dr Antony Theodore 15 July 2017

Always staring at her awkwardness Yes your heart it full of colours, it is true we dont believe in ourselves, our beauty, our abilities, so pour your heart on paper and write and write and become a great poetess. liked ur poem very much. tony

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Nidhi Agrawal 15 July 2017

Thank you so much.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 14 July 2017

Sounds like a geode - you know those amazing crystals that look ordinary on the outside? Beautiful poem. Is it you?

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Nidhi Agrawal 15 July 2017

What lovely imagination comparing an artist to a geode. No it's not me. I wrote this based upon a character I read in a book.

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