Never Try To... Comments

A powerful emotional outburst…..

Hate can not be won over by hate. While vileness should be riled, the vile need to be won over by love, I believe.

Never try something unknown. To venture is gain.

To kindle the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

Very powerful emotional write..I'll hug death, Leaving my life behind! bold is always gold..thank you

This here Is very much interesting A powerfull message Tendered with calm and clarity, Expressing those feelings That dare not to hide I love it Great write as always! The_African_Son

Strong Outburst...dont even dare to come near u

Strong feelings expressed here - good write.

Strong feelings expressed here - good write.

Its wonderful..but so much hatred...

as if an answer to a question you opened lines, entire poem briefly it meant like you're shielding a weapon! !

i like the ending, the expression of anger and despair is crisp clear.. :)

The ending what a close. Liked blue devil mind but will admit, not sure of it's symbolism. Strong poem.

Eloquent versing, Nil...Has a prosaic smack to it, amd i'm likin' it fine...~FjR~