Monday, June 5, 2023

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Rating: 5.0

The Protector - 6

the dark days come
and the dark days go
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Sandra Feldman 06 June 2023

So many times we are not masters of our feelings and hasve to let the pain come out and be sincere, at least with ourselves. I admire your courage and truthful confession in this brave and painful poem. I find this work very brave and full of painful courage!

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We dream, we boast… but in the end, we realise that we are masters of nothing! Thank you, Sandra….

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Martinez Salotori 06 June 2023

Long road to freedom leads from the darkness to light. Keep hope alive.

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When we have a heart that has forgotten to keep its beats and mind that has ceased to exist, where do we house hopes?

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Novice Writer 05 June 2023

I remember my past self in this poem, before i learn to reflect on myself, that's how i see my life that time.

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I understand, dear poet. Feels good that you have come out of those days. Your resilience is amazing!

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And thank you for reading the poem.

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M. Asim Nehal 05 June 2023

Susan Williams is a wonderful poetess and a dear friend to all of us on PH forum. Nice follow through of her poem 'Staring out the window'.

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Sure, Susan is a poet of true talent…

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M. Asim Nehal 05 June 2023

In this life, everything is temporary, as nature demonstrates to us. Night follows day, and seasons like summer, winter, and rains come and go. Similarly, good and bad events also come and go in our lives. Only those who comprehend this reality can remain tranquil and composed.5*****

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You are right, dear poet. But I am possessed! I could not stay composed. Shall try to, before I write again…Thank you!

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Poetic Sky 05 June 2023

Negativity is bad for human race in general and thru poetry in particular, one should remain positive in life with what ever pain it gives. Life is filled with challenges. I liked the emotions and the inspiration. Full STARS *

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I am a positive person. But there are times, when I find no light at the end of the tunnel. Hope you could understand, after going through the entire series…. Thank you, dear poet

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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