Thursday, August 16, 2007

Never To Reach The Angels Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my life i hadn't ever seen a girl so wise so beauty.
Makes me waiting tomorrow comes to only see the pretty.
Nothing as beautiful as her charming face.
And nothing as charming as her beautiful kiss.
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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 09 July 2010

'Nothing as beautiful as her charming face./And nothing as charming as her beautiful kiss.' Favorite lines. I'm noticing a common themes in your poems, and the subject I really like.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 September 2008

Nice composition, last two lines are beautiful.10++

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Nathaniel Booker 05 September 2008

Quite often, people think that men are incapable of showing and expressing true feelings of love, adoration and affection... well this wonderful gem dispells all of those myths... Very Sweet and Enchanting... she is blessed if you've found her... and in store for a wondrous treasure if you haven't and when you do. Be Well **10**

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Anjali Sinha 03 September 2008

wow! ! ! dream--mirage-reveries and finally paradise. lovely. +10 regards anjali

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 August 2008

wonderfull! ! ! ! ! ! ........thanks.......10

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