Wednesday, October 25, 2006

Never To Be Wanted Comments

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If I was with a cheating partner
I would be the unlucky partner
If I was to be chosen out of the two
I would be left out of that queue
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Shane Clawson 17 January 2008

'Love now means cheating, On and on I see it repeating' A poem of love with a bitter twist. Thanx for the comment. I was just curious, have/are you suffering from depression?

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John Kay 02 November 2006

The last two lines are great-the nail driven deep into the wood.

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Trinity K 30 October 2006

not cheating and unlucky.......a day of judgement.....suzan.....very well....wafts warps of life......a little bit.....seen.thnx for being you.....

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Scott Austin 25 October 2006

The sadness is felt throughout this write. May you find peace and joy with in your heart. Scott

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Ashish R 25 October 2006

A sad poem but feels nice on the tongue. Ashish.

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Ashish R 25 October 2006

A sad poem but feels nice on the tongue. Ashish.

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Ashish R 25 October 2006

A sad poem but feels nice on the tongue. Ashish.

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Ashish R 25 October 2006

A sad poem but feels nice on the tongue. Ashish.

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