Never Tell Mama Comments

I wont my dear, i wouldnt want mummy to get hurt Lovely poem

fire, water, you are in danger. and dont tell mamma. she will come and get burned while saving me or get drowned while saving me... such fine and loving write. sooooo full of love and care. thank you.

What a beautiful poem..

I read couple of your poems, I must book quick to appreciate your choice of employing simple words in painting your picture.it made your works easy to read & the messages easier to comprehend. Then mama shouldn't suffer where the cross is ours to carry. Lovely piece of work!

Hmmmmmm...... A stupendous African versification. I love the innocence the poem paints; the voice of words used successfully depicts the young child trying to beat the downs of life without stressing his mother whom he knows will trouble herself trying to help him out. The quicker a child realizes life's problems without relying on his parent, the easier it is for him to surpass

It's burning me; and, i am in deep pain! Nice work.

Beautiful drop favour. Emotional write that shows your love for mama.Keep inking.