Sunday, May 6, 2012

Never Surrender Comments

Rating: 4.3

I'll never surrender, forever fighting til the end. Life often buries my face in the dirt, yet I stand to my feet and try again.

At times the world is cold and harsh, things never seem to go the right way.
I must march out of the darkness and never again let myself fall astray.
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* Sunprincess * 29 August 2014

.............never give up....never surrender....this is what life is all about....this positive message is very nicely penned....

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Patricia Grantham 29 August 2014

A very positive and a truly inspiring write. It lifts the spirits and makes the mind soar. Don't ever give up. That is the ultimate goal in life. Loved this write Joshua.

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Life is a constant struggle but a true survivor never gives up on their goals..good poem..thanks..

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Babatunde Aremu 29 August 2014

No retreat, no surrender. A positive mental attitude. That's great!

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Jasbir Chatterjee 29 August 2014

I wish you all the best, Joshua! Positive thinking always does wonders...Good poem!

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Akhtar Jawad 29 August 2014

Congrats. The poem deserved the honor it got. Your firm determination not to surrender and fight is an inspiration for others and a message that will remain in the book of poems for ever.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 29 August 2013

Very inspiring and assertive write, a strong stand and firm conviction.

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Neela Nath Das 17 September 2012

Marvelous poem.Love is the driving force which makes us stronger to win the struggle of life.

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Sallam Yassin 11 September 2012

go ahaed with love god bless u. i'm sure with ur love and faith N THIS TALENT U ARE ALWAYS WINNER NO MATTER WHAT.......

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Savita Tyagi 29 August 2012

Beautiful write. Life is struggle but you have love's strength by your side. Stand by that love. Love your optimism.

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Leslie Philibert 29 August 2012

I think this is a good poem, that has rightly become good reviews. Just one small point, , the couplet structure is not always constant (4,6 and 7 stanzas) which breaks up the tempo, but all in all very good work!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 29 August 2012

when we surrender our life to sacrifice for the welfare of the family, in particular for the children, we do not have to surrender for any other evils. JC, though sad and in certain lines too much of unnecessary visuals, still inspirational to thousands of hearts who need to be inspired.

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Tony Walton 29 August 2012

Actually, Nilangshu, 'to strive, to seek...' etc. is St Ignatius Loyala, not Homer.

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Neela Nath Das 12 August 2012

wow! It sounds like Ulysses --to strive, to seek, to find and not to yield.A poem on strong optimism.Loved it.

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 05 August 2012

great! ! ! ! ! ! the memories are clearly depicted, and do hope uoy continue...... but broyher please don't conider me gifted, i am just what life have been teaching me..... wish you a bright future...

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Darkangel Flyfree 05 August 2012

Very good poem! Never give up, never surrender, you have something to live for and eventually things will get better. Love your poem! ! !

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Sherry Painter 05 August 2012

This is a poem about presaverence, and I loved every lie that has been written. With these, I'm assumeing, real life cases, it makes pomes worth takeing the time to have been read :) ..... Let me just say, if I had more than 2 thumbs I'd have them up as well as the 2 :) .

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Kasia Fedyk 05 August 2012

Joshua, this is an amazing poem, I feel the pure emotion in every letter, with so much truth ringing through. The light you have within is so strong and it will never fail you in all that you do in your life, I can feel your strength, believe, faith and hope poring out. That is so right past is past all we have is now this moment and its precious, it is up to us to make it, with every beat of our heart filled with love. Joshua, Beautiful! ! God Bless Love and Light

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Unwritten Soul 09 May 2012

The positiveness like this is very important, i am glad you make it so clear from your mind! to find a way for better future..you have gone to bad past days but now u are stronger! i am proud that you are stronger to fight anything for yourself and your kids life! keep bright always! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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