Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Never Shall I Have Friends Or Lovers~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fall away from me, my love;
Fall away just like the others.
I shall never have anyone;
Never shall I have friends or lovers.
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Hannah Noelle
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Anthony Burkett 21 January 2014

What I find most appealing to me is your poem's depth of raw emotion... the sadness and despair of its reveal... the words surround me like a soft blanket of denial, sheltering me from my own vulnerability... your words make me feel... and that is poetry's justification for its existence... it matters most not what we feel, but how much we feel... and I am filled with the emotion of your pen... Touché to you dear poet.

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