Tuesday, April 7, 2009

.........Never Seen Myself In White... Comments

Rating: 4.5

Here is me alone sitting under the stars
looking at the sky and the most beautiful feature my very sweet moon in the darkest night

thinking if my sweet love is thinking of me by now
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Little Sunshine
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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

Lovely write 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 24 May 2009

Emotional vibrant...well worded piece...thanks Little 10

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Seth Mutau 18 May 2009

great work, the poem has a sweet sad vibe, but i like it......straight 10

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Muhammad Ali 15 May 2009

nice work dear friend....10

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Yasser Koor 30 April 2009

it is great poem ans fntastic feeling. but i can touch something sad in this poem. don't feel sorry :) cheers Timon

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 April 2009

A m a z i n g

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Justice For All 11 April 2009

i think it's the best poem you ever write it gots so much feelings i really loved it.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 April 2009

I'm sure he would love to be sharing the moonlight with you, sweet write Miss Sunshine... Andy 10+

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Fatima Sweet 07 April 2009

I bet he was thinking of you, loving everything about you, knowing there is not another who loves him like you.. Fatima 10

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Eyan Desir 07 April 2009

well this poem was very interesting it made me smile ..... a good read

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Grace Guintos 07 April 2009

hi.. this is grace you have a wonderful poem.. dont stop making one.. keep inspiring others.. ok? ? got to go..

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