Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Never Say ' Later ' Comments

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Never say later or tomorrow,
For it results in a great sorrow.
Say ' now ' and take some pain,
For it will be a true gain.
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti
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Ramesh Rai 23 April 2016

In India generally we say one minute but we don't know that this one minute will never come. A worthy write. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 February 2016

Yes, tomorrow is another day. Nice piece of work.

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Raymond Farrell 14 December 2015

Sage advice that all would do well to heed.

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Loke Kok Yee 01 November 2015

very sound advice beautifully written-10

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Kewayne Wadley 25 October 2015

I love the message shown in your poems! You speak much truth. Very sincere in the way you write.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 October 2015

Har shay mein nihan hay husn koi, ranai khair ki ujlat hay.............

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 09 October 2015

More late is more difficult to attain the goals. Nicety of lines.

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Kelly Kurt 26 September 2015

A wonderfully crafted poem, Abdulrazak. Thank you for sharing

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Mark Heathcote 16 September 2015

Sage’s good advice here’s one I learnt at school. A stitch in time saves nine. Nice one.

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 16 September 2015

So inspirational! I love it!

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Liza Sudina 13 September 2015

Words of a very wise person or a saint.

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Mj Lemon 10 September 2015

So many times I have watched small problems evolve into explosive issues because nobody wanted to do today what they could put off to tomorrow....This is a brilliant poem, and a shrewd meditation on life. A great work.

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Valsa George 06 September 2015

Postponing things for tomorrow is a common trend among most of us! The work and responsibilities thus accumulated will be too heavy on our shoulders to bear and we might perish under the weight! Act and act in the living present as if tomorrow is not there! It is the secret to success! Great thoughts!

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Savita Tyagi 05 September 2015

Present is what counts. Even with pain a satisfaction of doing is there. Good message, written well.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 August 2015

Say now ans take some pains; yes, the pains of life with the troubles around it. Nice work.

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Jaishree Nair 12 August 2015

We can never be sure of our tomorrow so we should live the moment.A beautiful write.Enjoyed reading.Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 August 2015

Say ' now ' and take some pain, For it will be a true gain. ....We should do now what to do, not tomorrow, .Of course we will get pain but we will be gainer. So truely speculated and depicted. Thanks.

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