Never say later or tomorrow,
For it results in a great sorrow.
Say ' now ' and take some pain,
For it will be a true gain.
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I love the message shown in your poems! You speak much truth. Very sincere in the way you write.
Har shay mein nihan hay husn koi, ranai khair ki ujlat hay.............
More late is more difficult to attain the goals. Nicety of lines.
A wonderfully crafted poem, Abdulrazak. Thank you for sharing
Sage’s good advice here’s one I learnt at school. A stitch in time saves nine. Nice one.
So many times I have watched small problems evolve into explosive issues because nobody wanted to do today what they could put off to tomorrow....This is a brilliant poem, and a shrewd meditation on life. A great work.
Postponing things for tomorrow is a common trend among most of us! The work and responsibilities thus accumulated will be too heavy on our shoulders to bear and we might perish under the weight! Act and act in the living present as if tomorrow is not there! It is the secret to success! Great thoughts!
Present is what counts. Even with pain a satisfaction of doing is there. Good message, written well.
Say now ans take some pains; yes, the pains of life with the troubles around it. Nice work.
We can never be sure of our tomorrow so we should live the moment.A beautiful write.Enjoyed reading.Thanks
Say ' now ' and take some pain, For it will be a true gain. ....We should do now what to do, not tomorrow, .Of course we will get pain but we will be gainer. So truely speculated and depicted. Thanks.
In India generally we say one minute but we don't know that this one minute will never come. A worthy write. Thanks for sharing.