Friday, January 19, 2007

Never Say Die (Part 4) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Please read parts 1-3 first

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Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
Chuck Audette 01 February 2007

Oh, you misled me down that pessimistic path so easily in this one. Nicely finished up, great little action/suspense piece. Maybe you should write for CSI? -chuck

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Alison Cassidy 27 January 2007

Great read Dee. Something tells me this is a true story too. You keep the reader's attention until the last exciting moment. Excellent poem. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxx

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Barry Van Allen 27 January 2007

Dee, Two things : (1) 40 ... and you know what that means! I know that you do not care. (2) If you threw that computer in the trash... GO GET IT! NOW! ! !

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R H 24 January 2007

Phew! A gripping narrative told with great skill. I'm glad that her strength and will to survive shone through in the end - sadly this is not always the case...well done Dee. Justine

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Esther Leclerc 23 January 2007

So nice, so good to read of victory in this scenario, seldom seen in reality. Here is to all the victims/survivors who didn't get their victory. Well told tale, Dee.

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This was not the most predictable ending to a masterfully told story. Well done. Dee. And... it isn't unrealistic. t x

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jack russell 21 January 2007

And they all lived happily ever after :) Justice, of sorts, was finally done. Hooked from beginning to end. Thanks, Dee :) Hugz jack.

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Melvina Germain 21 January 2007

This was truly a marvelous series Dee, you kept the reader wanting to know what was going to happen next. Thankyou for the happy ending, I love happy endings. ---Melvina---

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Brian Dorn 20 January 2007

Excellent series Dee! After finishing each part, I felt the urgency to read on... the mark of great writing. Well done! ! Brian

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joey oo 20 January 2007

Amazing Dee - a chill ran through my body on reading this...splendid finale... I do so like it when there's a happy ending... Take care. Joey ps Hasn't anyone ever told you about the dangers of walking alone at night! ! ! :)

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Tranquil Ocean 19 January 2007

A spectaular ending to a great series! Well Done! ! TO

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Diane Violet 19 January 2007

Awesome series Dee.............

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Geoff Warden 19 January 2007

Very well done DEE! ! ! ! !

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Francesca Johnson 19 January 2007

As I have said, Dee, the title gave me some hope, after reading the first three parts. And thankfully, it all ended well. Now I can get some sleep........... phew! Love, Fran xxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 January 2007

E N C O R E... E N C O R E.......M A G N I F I C O! Indded a storied tale of epic offering....This 4-Part Series brimmed with verve,3-d image, inventiveness & overall outstanding craftsmanship...Clerly one of, if not your best work...Or at least, one to take voluminous pride in...Kudos to you, Dee! ~F. j. R. ~

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Zen Bojczuk 19 January 2007

Epic poem Dee. You hooked me in part 1.

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