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Great read Dee. Something tells me this is a true story too. You keep the reader's attention until the last exciting moment. Excellent poem. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxx
Dee, Two things : (1) 40 ... and you know what that means! I know that you do not care. (2) If you threw that computer in the trash... GO GET IT! NOW! ! !
Phew! A gripping narrative told with great skill. I'm glad that her strength and will to survive shone through in the end - sadly this is not always the case...well done Dee. Justine
So nice, so good to read of victory in this scenario, seldom seen in reality. Here is to all the victims/survivors who didn't get their victory. Well told tale, Dee.
This was not the most predictable ending to a masterfully told story. Well done. Dee. And... it isn't unrealistic. t x
And they all lived happily ever after :) Justice, of sorts, was finally done. Hooked from beginning to end. Thanks, Dee :) Hugz jack.
This was truly a marvelous series Dee, you kept the reader wanting to know what was going to happen next. Thankyou for the happy ending, I love happy endings. ---Melvina---
Excellent series Dee! After finishing each part, I felt the urgency to read on... the mark of great writing. Well done! ! Brian
Amazing Dee - a chill ran through my body on reading this...splendid finale... I do so like it when there's a happy ending... Take care. Joey ps Hasn't anyone ever told you about the dangers of walking alone at night! ! ! :)
As I have said, Dee, the title gave me some hope, after reading the first three parts. And thankfully, it all ended well. Now I can get some sleep........... phew! Love, Fran xxxx
E N C O R E... E N C O R E.......M A G N I F I C O! Indded a storied tale of epic offering....This 4-Part Series brimmed with verve,3-d image, inventiveness & overall outstanding craftsmanship...Clerly one of, if not your best work...Or at least, one to take voluminous pride in...Kudos to you, Dee! ~F. j. R. ~
Oh, you misled me down that pessimistic path so easily in this one. Nicely finished up, great little action/suspense piece. Maybe you should write for CSI? -chuck