try to add some more..you're really good at writing, but when you write you must take care that the 80% belongs to what you wana say and 20% must belong to what others feel.. Keep it up..i really like the way you wrote it..but it was lacking something.. Best wishes to you :)
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try to add some more..you're really good at writing, but when you write you must take care that the 80% belongs to what you wana say and 20% must belong to what others feel.. Keep it up..i really like the way you wrote it..but it was lacking something.. Best wishes to you :)