Saturday, May 5, 2018

Never Promise O Dawn Comments

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If ever one makes
a promise
one must keep it
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me poet yeps poet
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 May 2018

my earliest girl friends in school was DAWN she did me lovingly adorn adorn but to marry her I wasn't born......loved these lines. Beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Sir but for you- - - I wouldn't be a poet.... You charm me so much... like did Dawn or better still morning and evening equal ''TWILIGHT''.... Dawn out of my life has gone...for her I wasn't ever born..so why should i now mourn Dawn has come and gone

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Rajendra Rout 05 May 2018

Lovely poem and very beautiful picture.i enjoy this poem.thanks for sharing this poem 10+++

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You rekindle those moments of ecstasy - - which i suffered - -as in my youth... You have the notes/vibes of a lover too - -RR ''''- - of you both Dawn and I wouldv'e be proud..even if she were to return for a moment ere comes my last dawn

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