Friday, March 3, 2006

Never Mine Comments

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It was that time of year
towards end of summer
lately leaves fall
with barely a breath of wind
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peter rodenby
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Malini Kadir 17 March 2008

the story told...and left us guessing to re read to wonder......

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Esther Leclerc 05 March 2006

I like this story-poem and I believe that I understand it, except for the lines beginning with 'O Holy Mother' ending with 'Never mine' - who is addressing her (not her Son - - 'I can never be the lover that you lost') ? An interesting poem.

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