You were never mine
Still I felt fine
As it was my opinion
To make you companion
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Aruna Lakra very true in real life Unlike · Reply · 1 · 8 hrs
agdish Sahai Sharma · Friends with Shalini Samuel Dear brother Hasmukhmehta Glad to know.that u r a good poet. I find humour in ur poem. Loving. Thanks. Best wishes. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 5 hrs
welcome poet ariel Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now 5 hours ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply
Don't rhyme, and stop trying to be all cute. You wrote love and war in the same line, no one who knows love or war puts them as equals, you are shameful. No one compels you if you have never been drafted for war, compels you to be away from your love? Pathetic. 6 hours ago by Isaac Baker | Reply
This poem speaks about a man's secret love that he nurtured and when revealed the result was expected pain, agony and suffering, Nicely put together in five stanzas.
Yes love and war Both eludes me far I don’t know how to approach But mind wonders in position as such
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