Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, October 13, 2015

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You were never mine
Still I felt fine
As it was my opinion
To make you companion
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2015

welcome 'Lola del Rosario Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2015

Aruna Lakra very true in real life Unlike · Reply · 1 · 8 hrs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2015

agdish Sahai Sharma · Friends with Shalini Samuel Dear brother Hasmukhmehta Glad to know.that u r a good poet. I find humour in ur poem. Loving. Thanks. Best wishes. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 5 hrs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2015

welcome poet ariel Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now 5 hours ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2015

Don't rhyme, and stop trying to be all cute. You wrote love and war in the same line, no one who knows love or war puts them as equals, you are shameful. No one compels you if you have never been drafted for war, compels you to be away from your love? Pathetic. 6 hours ago by Isaac Baker | Reply

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M Asim Nehal 14 October 2015

This poem speaks about a man's secret love that he nurtured and when revealed the result was expected pain, agony and suffering, Nicely put together in five stanzas.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 October 2015

Yes love and war Both eludes me far I don’t know how to approach But mind wonders in position as such

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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