......Never Look Like One... Comments

, , a powerful ending to this poem, , , be a woman but never look like one amzing poem, , , ,

Be a woman but never look like one”- - - - - - - - - -Great lines.

Your poem is fantastic

Pregnant with a passion that is both creative and compelling!

Nice and lovely poem.

Good one yash.excellent work...

Your poem is very good. I like it. (:

Your poem is, so wonderfully done. Truly remarkable. Bien! .

very talented.. must say your poems move me

You have beautifully accentuated her innocence and have produced a very powerful, and provocative poem. An essence of beauty in it's agony. Loved it, keep going, I am loving all of your work. Thank you once again for sharing. Please keep in touch. RoseAnn

Age of the poet has nothing to do with the art of poetry especially when one is divinely gifted...i see vocabulary plays smooth in your hands...good narrative!

Its not easy to follow the velocity of her sight, She is sun of the suns with amazing light, So impressive and so much bright, A teen aged girl and an angelic flight, I am ashamed of myself that I am a male, Oh my God why not a female!

a powerful write, very touching.

it's a nice poem, very touching...but poems like these only accentuate a feeling of helplessness since no solution seems to be in sight...

Excellent write Yash. A very moving last verse. Thank You

Once again a brilliant write from your pen... You have captured the inner feelings of women very well.. Its really a matured write from your side especially when you are just 16....I loved reading each lines..Well done..Yash.

a very colorful words that would struck our hearts. Well done Yash, my friend.

No words to praise.....A superb talent.....Miles to go...Keep it up....

A brilliant, impactful and powerfullly written poem. I agree, you have a great future in the poetry realm. Please keep at it=10

A very powerful statement of cultural judgment shared poignantly with grace. The last verse could stand alone it's delivery and arrangement speckled with words of perfection. I look forward to hearing more from you!