Never Let Your Life Get You Down... Comments

her passion was killed With the negative thoughts To let her sleep eternally. Never let negative thoughts rule over you........ thoughts are like white skies that move on and on...... thoughts come and go. do not believe thoughts are eternal and it may affect you badly if they are negative. a fine poem bringing in a lot of truth. tony

Excellent! So empathetically written. Every stanza leaves a strong impression. Keep writing dear Naila.

We do not love a person for what he does; we love what he does because we love him. Well done Nalla.

If one got courage he can face challenges of life boldly. A beautiful composition indeed with a sweet flow. 'But there was a courage on her face For the emperor of this universe... 'is so nice. Thanks for sharing.

Love, passion and a smile is the result of tremendous courage, hope and a inner belief when life is throwing too much negativity at you, rising from the debris your great passion lightens the heavy load and an enviable freedom lights up your eyes! Stunning write Naila!

Hi Naila Marvellous write. The power of womanhood... In spite of her bleeding wounds, she retains courage and love... love for the universe, the fellow beings.... That is the identity of woman... very poignant write

Add a comment.what a superb lyrical expression of your soulful thoughts, Thanks for sharing